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How long will I take
the pain of these memories?
How long will it take
'till I'll be truly free?
How much of this pain
can one person take?
You made what you made
now, can you unmake?

I see you laugh, my soul hurts
These tears that I hide
I wish you'd die, I can't control my thoughts
Peace of mind, I can't seem to find

I only want a bit
just a little peace
Tired from falling and falling
into this abyss
These visions of destruction
are they truly real?
How much of this pain
can one person deal?

I see you laugh, my soul hurts
These tears that I hide
I wish you'd die, I can't control my thoughts
Peace of mind, I can't seem to find

You see, now I drift
can't seem to hold on
I wanted someone
but I stayed alone
There's no point in this
no-one seems to gain
But you still go on
trust me, it's in vain
©2002-2009 ~munky-head
:iconmunky-head:

Author's Comments

The first poem I was happy with. People who know me will have no problem understanding what it's all about.

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:iconksb-artist:
sorry to hear that you feel like this...it's really good written...and very emotional Petting is sensual! ... will a cookie cheer ya up Cookie

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:iconitzy-bitzy:
hi pasha!
this poem is soooo well written! keep up the good work...
I'm sorry you feel that way, but I hope you know that I'm always here if you need to talk Hug
thanx for the support you've given me
ZeZ
MJ

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